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Why are they your 14th Goldfish – how do they inspire your future?
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Why are they your 14th Goldfish – how do they inspire your future?
Personification
Difference simile and metaphor

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Personification

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Rewrite
Rewrite due:

Tuesday 7th of November 9am
Magister assignments
WORD FORMAT!!!

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Checkpoint - not completed  yet...? 
7th of November
Room 005
Mrs Theron
13:45 (70 MINUTES)

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Checkpoint test common mistakes...
Fronted adverbial - adverbial of time - Later!!
Prepositional phrases
Collective noun - pack of what?
Fact/opinion. What is the difference?
Ideas not developed
Loooooooooooong sentences
Contractions/informal language

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Under developed idea
You are not only helping them, but also other animals

They are really important to the foodchain.

If they are extinct, humans are in trouble.

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Looooooooong sentence
The species I have chosen is the bee, I believe the bee should be saved because despite being small it makes a HUGE impact in our lives, without the bee, our forests and literally all vegetation would be grey and in case you forgot: our vegetables and fruit are vegetation, our livestock graze on grass so without bees our livestock would die, so, would we be dead too.

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Action plan
Read over your feedback
Write down 2 things you will do to improve fro the JSC
Highlight these in your notebook
Send them to me via the teams assignment - I will pay attention to them during your speech test.
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