23-24 Year 3 P1W5L1 lesson 90 min - Writing - Essay

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23-24 Year 3 P1W5L1 lesson 90 min - Writing - Essay

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Lesson today
  • Check-in
  • Explanation about the writing exam paper (Paper 2)
  • Writing assignment

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Check in

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Same marks, so equally important.

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What is being tested?
  • Hold the target reader's attention. 
  • The text is well organised and coherent.
  • A range of language with control and flexibility.
  • The target reader is informed.
  • Level C1: communicate straightforward and complex ideas.
  • Using the conventions of the communicative task, effectively.

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Building blocks towards good writing:
Organisation: 
structure and balance
Communicative achievement: 
reader, text conventions, complex ideas
Language: 
express ideas (straightforward and complex)
Content: 
process input

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Candidate results:
  • Strongest area: content
  • Weakest area: language
  • Next weakest area: organisation 

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Common weaknesses:
No plan
No, or poorly balanced paragraphs
Less than an effective introduction, topic sentences, conclusion
Genre conventions could be more effective

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Steps to follow:
  1.  Process task
  2.  Plan
  3.  Write
  4.  Check 

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Genre matrix example: essays
Organisation and format: 
Intro, body, conclusion: topic sentences
Language and register: 
Neutral: 'I', but less 'you'; argumentative language (opinion, speculation, contrast, etc.)
Purpose: 
Inform (views, opinions), tutor, needs to understand the argument: academic context
Content: 
General ideas or debates

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Useful language:
... does not necessarily mean..., 
is required, 
high numbers of (people etc.), 
there are a variety of factors to consider; 
In this essay, I will discuss... 
Apart from this, 
whilst ..., 
however, 
in contrast 

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Use the genre matrix as a planning tool
Who are you writing to?
What's the context?
What is your purpose for writing?
What does your reader need to know?
What points will you highlight? And what ideas can you produce to support them?
Purpose
Content

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Use the genre matrix as a planning tool
What specific formats are needed for your genre?
How are you organising your ideas?
How many paragraphs and how are they connected?
Organisation and format

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Use the genre matrix as a planning tool
What language would be useful, to match your genre, and to achieve your communicative purpose?
What register is appropriate?
Language and register

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Homework
https://www.cambridgeenglish.org/exams-and-tests/advanced/preparation/
https://www.cambridgeenglish.org/Images/583526-c1-advanced-self-access-learning-writing-part-1-discursive-essay.pdf

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How do you feel at the end of the lesson?
😒🙁😐🙂😃

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