Sept 20 - P1 - 3V

To do:
  • Find a seat
  • Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
  •  Chewing gum  in the trashcan
  • Phone in the bag 
  • only notebook + pens on table
Assignment:
grab your namesign and put it in front of you 
+ In your notebook, write a description of your family (here on the left). 


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To do:
  • Find a seat
  • Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
  •  Chewing gum  in the trashcan
  • Phone in the bag 
  • only notebook + pens on table
Assignment:
grab your namesign and put it in front of you 
+ In your notebook, write a description of your family (here on the left). 


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4:00

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Goals for today
I can give peer feedback

I know what goals I need to work on in order to improve my skills and knowledge regarding writing an email

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Programme
Warming-up

Peer feedback

DIY: rewrite your email









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Test: Writing I
 Monday, 7th of October

Goal: Writing an email 
to a penpal

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Feedback:
- Specifiek 
- Wat kan verbeterd worden 
(en vooral hoe)
- Wees aardig

Tip:
'highlight' wat fout is en zet in diezelfde kleur je feedback

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3 rounds of feedback
4 minutes per round
1 subject per round 
(spelling, grammar and use of capital letters)
Step 1: Copy + paste (kopieer en plak) je tekst op een volgende pagina in je document > hier gaat je partner feedback op geven
Degene die feedback geeft; zet je naam in het document
Daarna: vul voor elkaar je feedback op papier 
in het kort op je learning aims kaart

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Round 1: Conventions
Focus: 
Greeting, paragraphs (1 subject
per paragraph), sign-off

 
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Round 2: Complete?
Focus: 
Does it meet the requirements from the writing task as described in 1E + is it between 200 - 250 wordds?

 
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Round 3: Spelling
> Leestekens;
. . : ! ?

> correctly spelled?  
Not sure, check a dictionary 
+ your Insight book 
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Round 3: Grammar
Focus: Present Simple 
+ Present continuous

 
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DIY: rewrite the email
So far:
1 document, 2 pages:
1 original version
1 version with feedback
Now add:
a 3rd page with a rewritten version
(homework)
For Mon. 23rd:
upload 1 document with these 3 pages on Its Learning: 

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Nearing the end...
Homework:
Submit your rewritten (herschreven) email into the dropbox thingie in the planner. The document contains:
Page 1: original version
Page 2: copy + feedback
Page 3: rewritten version

 Study words 31 - 60 (see wordlist file in planner)

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