CEA Writing

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 4

CAE Writing

Objectives

• At the end of this lesson, you will have a better understanding of what is expected from you when it comes to writing an essay. 
• At the end of this lesson, you will have a better idea about how to provide your classmates with peer feedback.
• At the end of this lesson, you will have a better understanding of how to revise your own work based on the feedback you have received from classmates. 

Planning

• Explanation about essay
• What types of feedback are there?
• What will you be assessed on? 
• Writing
• Provide classmates with peer-feedback
• Revise personal work 

Essay

• SB page 104
• We will be focusing
    on the body of your
    essay today. 

Part 1

Time for action!

Have you received any form of feedback today?

YES

NO

Who have you received that feedback from?

Does a person that provides feedback have to be very knowledgeable about the topic?

What will you be assessed on?

What will you be assessed on?

Peer-Feedback

• Go to the link I shared with you in Teams
• Create an account using your school email
• Use a username and password you will remember!!
• Copy the body of your essay and upload it to no red ink
• Review your peers' works. 
• If there's time left, start revising your work based on the feedback you received. 

To what extent do you feel that giving feedback has improved your writing skills?

15

To what extent do you feel that having received peer feedback has improved your writing skills?

15

In terms of preference, does peer feedback have your preference or does teacher feedback have your preference?

Peer-feedback

Teacher feedback