Lesson after the break

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• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 3

Lesson after the break

Bibienne	Isa	Marell	Sophie S	Aleen	Fehime
Sanne	Fehime	Jayden	Mohammad	Wies	Lara
Finn	Storm	Lauren	Juliet	Rik	Rodrigo
Eva	Sophie E	Roos	Liz	Elis	Aleyna
Haya	Siar	Fender		Guus	Julia

Seating chart 3B

Teacher

Elijah

Today 

• Feedback your essays 
• Listening F 
• Slim Stampen till the bell

How did writing essay go? 

Essay structure	The use of quotes (x2) provocative sentences (0), questions (quite many)
Introduction/ conclusion	Lack of strong closing sentences , very few successful conclusions
Body PEAS	Not always present
Punctuation	I - capital letter, commas and capital letters
Vocabulary	Use synonyms to avoid basic vocabulary

VWO-5,79

HAVO- 5.9

Introductions (1)

Where would the world be without the internet? There's loads of answers to this question, and thus, in this essay, I will go over some of the advantages and disadvantages of the internet in the social world. ( a great opening, thesis is missing, though)

Introductions (2)

Free time is when we discover ourselves and pursue our true passions. So should the weekend be three days instead of two? In this essay I am going to explain why an extra day could be helpful.

Body PEAS

First of all, students are a lot more energetic and than most adults. When teenagers go through puberty, they have various domains to explore, such as , love, doing illegal stuff, finding out your hobbies and other important things.Researchers say that most people don't know what they want to be when they grow up until 17-18 years of old. This claim results in having a lot more to do in their free time , because they have to experiment with several things to eventually find out what they really enjoy doing. As students get a lot of homework, they will be most likely spending the weekend finishing it. So, if there was an extra day , they wil have more time to discover their true self.

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Conclusion 

In conclusion, the internet has made us way more isolated from each other, because it gets very addicting for teenagers , making them ignore the outside world. It also makes a lot of people insecure due to cyberbulling. That results in avoiding other people and preference to stay alone. The internet might be a powerful and usefu tool, but it definitely separates us from each other and the real world .

Collection of clumsy sentences 

I don't know how they are going to do this in the future, because very much things are going with the internet and in the future it only will be more.

Sometimes these kinds of peoplewant to meet up, even though a lot of people who are victims don't agree to this some do.

Moreover, because of the internet it also might cause people to hurt other peoples feeling through cyberbulling .

I mean , saying something to someone over text is much easier in my opnion.

Common spelling mistakes 

your  ---    you're

which

there  ---  their 

life   ---     lives 

too much

Now

You will get your essay back, look it through and ask questions if you have any!

Done or no questions? Start slim stampen!!

To Sugarcoat	an expression term for adding sweetness to something in order to make it appealing
The Pot Calling The Kettle Black	When someone says it, they are pointing out the hypocrisy of the accuser, who is guilty of the same fault they are criticizing in someone else
Don’t Put All Your Eggs in One Basket	a popular saying that advises against putting all your resources, efforts, or hopes into a single place or venture
Once in a Blue Moon	is used to describe something that happens very rarely

Planning 

Today	Listening F plus slim stampen
06.11	Woots, earhones !!!
12.11	All slim stampen done!
13.11	Test chapter 1 (x2)
15.11	Listening test (x3)

Tomorrow 

Bring earphones with you ! 

Now 

Slim Stampen till the bell

Listening & watching practice

Introduction 

1.The four interviewees all give

1. explanations for the increasing use of cars.
2. examples of facilities needed to get people cycling.
3. reasons for driving a car rather than cycling.