H5 - Deltaplan - Period 2 - Writing - Lesson 5

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H5 - Deltaplan - Period 2 - Writing

Deltaplan - Writing

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Your own work

Advertising is a smart way to stimulate the economy. People buying faster things when they see an ad. Companies are making big profit when they are advertising, for example black Friday, people are buying in general a lot of stuff and for companies is this the best way to sell the products. Secondly, if there were no advertisements. Tv channels would not make it, because it is an important revenue model if there are no advertisements, we would not be able to watch tv anymore. On the other hand, advertisements are annoying to watch and tv channels can also make a paid channel where there are no advertisements. In conclusion, advertising is a good revenue model for company and tv channels. 

Your own work

Advertising can be very helpful. Products in the supermarket are become more and more expensive so for a little discount people are willing to go to the supermarket to by some cheap products. On the other hand, advertisements can be annoying. Sometimes the advertisements pop up and block the whole screen. Also, between different television programs there are always many advertisements that interrupt the television program for a few minutes. Which is very annoying since a lot of time is wasted by watching useless commercials of products that no one ever will buy. 

Correct the thesis statement:
Are study loans a big problem and if so, how to get rid of them?

Correct the thesis statement:
So is studying going to be something for the rich, and if so, how should that problem be fixed.

Writing time

What is your opinion on the payment system for college?

Write a short opinion piece

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