H4 - P1 - Week 4 - Lesson 4 - Writing feedback + Wasp

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• Middelbare school
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• Leerjaar 4

H4 - Week 4 - Lesson 4

Lesson Goals

- You will have learned from the feedback on your mock writing test

- You will have practised using linking words

Today's Lesson

Writing Feedback

Reading: linking words

Writing Feedback

I checked your compositions

Read the feedback and see if you understand

Important:

- Give it a title

- You must use 4 paragraphs

- Use linking words: but, because, however, moreover, etc. 

- Every paragraph needs specific information (pros, cons, etc.)

- Introduction: basic information about the topic 

- Conclusion: briefly repeat a pro and con and give a final verdict

Writing Feedback

Things that I noticed and that you should or shouldn't do on the test: 

- Do not use "but, because, and" at the start of a sentence. 

- Make sure your sentences link to each other. The content needs to flow. Don't put random sentences together. Use linking words: also, furthermore, moreover, etc. 

- Use CAPITAL letters at the start of a sentences, names, days, months, I (ik)

- Make sure you use commas after the linking word, if it's at the start of a sentence.

- Do not put new information in the conclusion, base your opinion on what you said earlier.

- When you abbreviate words (do not = don't), do not forget the apostrophe

Reading

Studentfile page 6

Assignment 20: 

- Look up the words in the article

- Which word has more or less the same meaning in the given context? Choose the correct option

Watching

We are going to watch the news

- Pay close attention

- Take notes

- We will talk about each news item together 

Lesson Goals

- You have learned from the feedback on your mock writing test

- You will have practised using linking words