BO7 lesson

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 3

What is your dream job?

Today

Discussing: dream jobs

Writing: A letter of application

Feedback: On your letter

Seating plan for today

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Writing a formal application letter

Writing a formal letter

Read this...

Is this a formal or informal letter? Why?

Now read this...

Is this a formal or informal letter? Why?

Get to making the writing plan!

Group blue

1 work with teacher on elements of your plan

2 independently write plan

3 Give/get feedback

4 Write your letter using feedback

Group pink

1 Work out and fill in the elements of  the plan

2 Write plan and check in with teacher

3 Start writing letter

4 Give/get feedback

5 Rewrite your letter using feedback

Group yellow

1 Work out and fill in the elements of the plan

2 Start writing your letter

3  Give/get feedback

4 Re write your letter using feedback

5 Check in with the teacher - using the rubric

But how to will this help you write your letter?

Planning time 20 minutes

At the end of 20 minutes planning sheets should be finished

Writing time 10 minutes

Then fill in the blank letter (group blue and pink)

Giving feedback

You will be divided into groups of three, you all give feedback on each other's writing plan (see next slide for groups).

1: Feedback on assignment criteria

2: Feedback on spelling/language use

3: Feedback on punctuation & lay-out

Quiet discussion

Who gives who feedback

Group 1

1

2

3

Group 2

1

2

3

Group 3

1

2

3

Group 4

1

2

3

Group 5

1

2

3

Group 7

1

2

3

Group 6

1

2

3

Back to writing!

Group blue: write your letter using the  feedback you got

Group pink and yellow: re-write your letter using the feedback you got

what was the most
helpful feedback?

Fill it in then give to the teacher