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Review writing: body paragraphs

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Review
Introduction
Body paragraphs
Conclusion

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RECAP QUESTION 1:
What THREE THINGS should be in your introduction?

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RECAP QUESTION 2:
What TWO THINGS should be in your conclusion?

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Body paragraphs
Paragraph 1: Topic 1: Reason 1 + specific example.
Paragraph 2: Topic 2: Reason 2 + specific example.
Paragraph 3: Topic 3: Reason 3 + specific example.
 

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BANDS - REVIEWS WANTED
We’re looking for reviews of new bands and artists. In your review you should comment on the members of the band/artist, the kind of music the band/artist plays and where they/he/she play(s). Would you recommend the band/artist to people your age?
The best reviews will be published in next month’s magazine.




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What THREE topics should you comment on in this review?

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What your body paragraphs will look like:
Paragraph 1: MEMBERS: Reason 1  + specific example.
Paragraph 2: KIND OF MUSIC: Reason 2 + specific example.
Paragraph 3: WHERE PLAYS: Reason 3 + specific example.
 


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Paragraph 1
Paragraph 1: MEMBERS: The members are really cute + Barry has nice hair.
A) Start with linking word. 
B) Introduce topic of BAND MEMBERS
C) Give your opinion (really cute!)
D) Give one example (Barry's hair)


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Write the first half of Paragraph 1, in which you A) start with a nice opening linking word. B) introduce the topic of the BAND MEMBERS.

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Write it as a text! Leave out A) and B)
Other good linking words to start off with
First of all, 
The first great thing about this band is that ... 
Firstly, 
In the first place,

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Write the second half of Paragraph 1, in which you C) give your opinion (really cute), and D) give one example (Barry's hair).

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So now, paragraph 1 should look something like this:


The first great thing about [[band name]] is of course its members. Each of the four members is adorable! Especially Barry, who has amazing hair. 

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Adjectives
Your text should be full of adjectives. 
Grading sheet says: 
"Special attention to adjectives, adverbs, language of description (+1pt if all sentences contain a good descriptive words)"

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Paragraph 2
Paragraph 2: KIND OF MUSIC: reason 1 + example.
A) Start with linking word.
B) Introduce topic of KIND OF MUSIC
C) Give your opinion (great hard-rock music)
D) Give one example (guitar is good) 


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A) linking word + B) topic 2 (KIND OF MUSIC).

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Write up Paragraph 2 in total. A) Start with linking word. B) Introduce topic of KIND OF MUSIC. C) Give your opinion. D) Give one example.

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We'll skip paragraph 3. 
By now you know that each of the body paragraphs needs 4 things:
A. linking word
B. topic
C. opinion
D. example
Also, remember to use lots of descriptive language (adjectives, etc.)

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RESTAURANT REVIEW
Your school magazine has commissioned you to write a review of one of the places students go to eat near your school. Write a review of such a place in the neighborhood.


Comment on its food, its staff (workers) and prices and finally give a recommendation.

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You're writing a review on Mc Donalds.
Write body paragraph 1 (food).

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You're writing a review on Mc Donalds. Write body paragraph 2 (staff).

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You're writing a review on Mc Donalds.
Write body paragraph 3 (prices).

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FINISH YOUR RESTAURANT REVIEW
Your school magazine has commissioned you to write a review of one of the places students go to eat near your school. Write a review of such a place in the neighborhood.


Comment on its food, its staff (workers) and prices and finally give a recommendation.

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