Wellness part 2 (3,4) writing

• Engels
• MBO
• Studiejaar 4

Today

Topic: physical and mental wellness

Practise: listening and writing

Goals:

-learn the difference between physical and mental wellness.

-learn the basics on how to write a short essay.

Which aspects are important when preparing and writing an essay?

Ella Dove's video (what the Wellness) comes under which category?

1. physical health
2. amusement
3. sports & leisure
4. alternative therapy

How does the 2nd video with Dr. Mitchell relate to Wellness?

How is Dr. Mitchell's speech structured?

How does Mr. Brewer make his story personal in the 3rd video?

Writing an essay in a nutshell:

-Read the assignment carefully.

-Plan your ideas first and then choose the best ones.

-Introduce your topic.

-Write about advantages/disadvantages and/or effects.

-Use linking words to structure your ideas.

-Draw your conclusion from the main ideas in your essay.

Linking words:

Use these expressions to order your ideas:

First of all, firstly, then, secondly, next, finally, lastly, to sum up, 

in conclusion.

Use these expressions to add more ideas from the same point of view:

in addition, what’s more, also, added to this.

To introduce the opposite point of view you can use these words and expressions:

However, on the other hand, then again.

Ready to write your own essay?

Choose 1 topic:

1. This relaxation therapy is what it takes to feel in balance again!

2. How to improve your mental wellbeing!

3. Foodtalk! How to stay healthy.

1. This rexalation therapy is what it takes to feel in balance again!

Choose a relaxation therapy carried out at Wellness centre.

• Introduce your therapy.
• Explain how it's carried out.
• Write about the advantages and disadvantages.
• Finish off with your own conclusion/opinion.

2. How to improve your mental wellbeing!

Examples: 

Isolation due to corona regulations, fear of failure or addictive behavior (such as; alcohol/smoking)

• Introduce a mental issue.
• Explain the downsides and give examples.
• Give advice for improvements.
• Finish off with your own conclusion/opinion.

3. Foodtalk! How to stay healthy.

Choose a foodtopic that helps you stay healthy, such as; a vegan diet or a gluten free diet.

• Introduce your foodtopic.
• Explain how it works (ingredients/products, time for breakfast/lunch/dinner).
• What are the effects? 
• Finish off with your own conclusion/opinion.