Essay Step by Step

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Essay step by step

In the essay you are expected to give your own opinion on a statement clearly and coherently. 

Your response should be at least 190 words long

and consist of 5 paragraphs.

Example

Introduction:Attention grabber + bridge + thesis statement 

Body paragraph 1: Remember: PEE!

Body paragraph 2: Remember: PEE!

Body paragraph 3: Remember: PEE!

Conclusion

There are two approaches which can be used to respond to the thesis statement:

1. The one-sided approach

- Introduction

- 3 paragraphs with arguments for (supporting) or against the thesis

- Conclusion

Thesis statement

Teenagers should be able to choose if they quit school before the age of 18. Think of arguments in favour 

and against.

Teenagers should be able to choose if they quit school before the age of 18.
Arguments in favour

Teenagers should be able to choose if they quit school before the age of 18.
Arguments against

Introduction

The introduction functions like a movie preview, to give your audience a taste of what’s to come, without giving away too much detail so that it does not steal any attention from the main body. You want your reader to be interested in what you have to say.

Introduction

Attention grabber  

Bridge 

Thesis statement 

Attention Grabber

Begin the introductory paragraph with a broad, general statement about the paper’s topic or even a question. Try to make it interesting and catchy to encourage your reader to want more information. Remember that the first few sentences give the reader the first impression of your personal response; it is extremely important that you make a good first impression.

Attention Grabber

You need a good attention grabber to make it interesting and catchy so your reader wants to continue reading.

But how do you come up with a good attention grabber? In general, there are two options:

Example of an attention grabber which is made up of a general observation:

A difficult problem that is facing society today is euthanasia, which is another word for mercy killing. Thousands of people are mortally ill because of an incurable disease. They are kept alive in artificial ways. They have no chance to recover completely, but most legal systems do not allow doctors to end their patients’ lives. Fatally ill patients in all countries should be given the choice to legally end their lives. 

Example of a shocking attention grabber:

Every day, fatally ill patients suffer horrendously and are begging to die. They are kept alive in artificial ways. They have no chance to recover completely, but most legal systems do not allow doctors to end their patients’ lives. Fatally ill patients in all countries should be given the choice to legally end their lives.

Thesis Statement

This is the last sentence of the introduction.

Remember it is a statement!

And it is NOT preceded by any linking words or used as some sort of conclusion of the introduction.

Bridge

The bridge consists of two or three sentences to guide your reader from your attention grabber to the thesis statement without revealing your arguments 

Now write the introduction.

Since the personal response should be a minimum of 300 words divided over 5 more or less equally divided paragraphs, the introduction should be around 60 words.

• Swap introductions with a classmate
  and give each other feedback
• Rewrite your introduction

There are two approaches which can be used to respond to the thesis statement:

1. The one-sided approach

 

2. The balanced approach

1. The one-sided approach

- Introduction

- 3 paragraphs with arguments for (supporting) or against the           thesis

- Conclusion

One-sided approach:

Body paragraph 1, 2 AND 3:

- Point supporting thesis statement

- Evidence

- Example

Body Paragraphs

The body paragraphs are the most important paragraphs in your personal response. They contain arguments to convince your reader to agree with you. If you do not offer plausible explanations, you are not likely to convince your reader.

POINT

The first sentence of the paragraph contains the POINT you want to make, (either in favour of or against the thesis statement. Starting with the point helps the reader understand what you are going to argue in that paragraph. 

POINT

Let’s have a look at an example of a sentence stating the point of a paragraph supporting the thesis statement Helmets should be mandatory for cyclists in the Netherlands.

First of all, a helmet will make sure fewer cyclists are killed or injured in traffic.

EVIDENCE

After the point you will present some EVIDENCE

First of all, a helmet will make sure fewer cyclists are killed or injured in traffic. A helmet is made of hard plastic on the outside and a few centimetres of polystyrene on the inside. Together, these layers protect the cyclist’s head in an accident. 

Example

First of all, a helmet will make sure fewer cyclists are killed or injured in traffic. A helmet is made of hard plastic on the outside and a few centimeters of polystyrene on the inside. Together, these layers protect the cyclist’s head in an accident. For example, if the cyclist falls off the bike and hits the asphalt, the helmet will break the fall and reduce the risk of serious head injuries. 

To help structure your ideas for the reader, you make use of linking words.

First of all, a helmet will make sure fewer cyclists are killed or injured in traffic. A helmet is made of hard plastic on the outside and a few centimetres of polystyrene on the inside. Together, these layers protect the cyclist’s head in an accident. For example, if the cyclist falls off the bike and hits the asphalt, the helmet will break the fall and reduce the risk of serious head injuries. 

Another example

The thesis statement is: 

Public transport should be free in the Netherlands.

POINT

Most importantly, free public transport will reduce global warming.

EVIDENCE

Most importantly, free public transport will reduce global warming. Cars emit great amounts of CO2, which is a gas that is harmful for the environment. It increases the greenhouse effect and therefore contributes to global warming. 

Example

Most importantly, free public transport will reduce global warming. Cars emit great amounts of CO2, which is a gas that is harmful for the environment. It increases the greenhouse effect and therefore contributes to global warming. So, if more people take the train or go by bus to work, there will be fewer cars on the road and thus less CO2 and that is better for the environment.

Linking words

Most importantly, free public transport will reduce global warming. Cars emit great amounts of CO2, which is a gas that is harmful for the environment. It increases the greenhouse effect and therefore contributes to global warming. So, if more people take the train or go by bus to work, there will be fewer cars on the road and thus less CO2 and that is better for the environment.

Before you start writing: 

- you have to make a plan with your arguments, evidence and         examples.

• Now fill in the body paragraphs 

       in the planning scheme. (on paper)

• Swap with a classmate and give each other feedback 

Conclusion

Summarize your three points supporting the thesis statement in other words than you have used in the three body paragraphs.

Conclusion:

Summarize both views (for and against thesis statement) and end with your final stance on the thesis statement.

• Now fill in the conclusion

       in the planning scheme. (on paper)

• Swap with a classmate and give each other feedback 

Now write your essay using the  planning scheme.

Before you hand your work in to be checked, 

have you:

- Checked your grammar and spelling?

- Used linking words?

- Made your POINT clear at the beginning of each body                       paragraph?

- Checked whether your essay is clear and coherent?

- Write down your name and the number of words you have             used under your essay