2324 essay writing : common mistakes / correct mistakes essay 1

Study objectives:
I can 
  • identify and correct mistakes commonly made in essay writing
  • plan and write an argumentative essay
  • use exam vocabulary in context

 
This week's work:

  • check last week's tasks
In class (1): correct the mistakes essay 1

  • plan essay 2 + start writing 


hand in essay 2 first lesson next week  (hand written)


 







     
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    Study objectives:
    I can 
    • identify and correct mistakes commonly made in essay writing
    • plan and write an argumentative essay
    • use exam vocabulary in context

     
    This week's work:

    • check last week's tasks
    In class (1): correct the mistakes essay 1

    • plan essay 2 + start writing 


    hand in essay 2 first lesson next week  (hand written)


     







       

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      Common mistakes in essay writing

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      Common mistakes in essay writing
      Content  
      • no thesis statement,  
      • unclear structure/ arguments,  
      • new arguments in conclusion 
      • no point to ponder

      You should be able to highlight your thesis statement and arguments in the text!!

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      Common mistakes in essay writing
      Stylistic:
      • informal language: kids, stuff 
      • contracted forms: don’t – do not 
      • ‘I’-constructions: I think this is wrong ->  
          This is wrong 
      • ‘you’-constructions: If you make something illegal -> 
          If something is made illegal 

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      Common mistakes in essay writing
      Spelling
      • to / too: it will be too late - others may be hurt too 
      go to the cinema - to be clear 
      • of / off: switch something off – fall off  
          of course – plenty of time 
      • there / their: there is much violence there (location) 
          they mind their own business (possessive) 


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      Common mistakes in essay writing
      Grammar
      • verb tenses (e.g. present simple vs. continuous),
      • passives!!!
      • word order,
      • incorrect references:
      these treatments lets – fireworks has its problems


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      Common mistakes in essay writing
      Linking words:
      • But, And, So, Because 
      Don’t use these at the start of your sentences. Instead use cohesive devices from your reader:  However, Moreover, Therefore,  
      At last, -> Finally, 
      At first, -> First of all, / Firstly, / In the first place, 


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      Common mistakes in essay writing

      Punctuation
      Please remember to start your sentences with a capital letter and end them with a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark. 


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      Common mistakes in essay writing

      Other
      • no (original) title
      • number of words (include a word count!),
      • number of paragraphs

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      Can you spot the mistake(s)?
      Please rewrite the sentences.

      Essay 1

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