Mrch 7 - 3V - P3

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo, vwo
• Leerjaar 2

To do:

• insight + notebook  on the table
• Air pods/head phones/etc + phone in the bag

Assignment:

Which of these is more formal + why?

There isn't a single protagonist in this story

OR

There are no main characters to speak of in this storyline

Goals

I can write a formal essay

I can explain the new test

Programme

Checking Woots results

Peer feedback writing task

DIY

Woots results

Go to woots.nl > log in with entree

Lower than 24 > I will see you at least 2x times during a 'banduur'

Remember > Listening II > March 28th

Writing task-time!

Who finished writing the essay?

Peer feedback time!

Step 1: copy your essay on a new page (within the same document)

Step 2: swap laptops with a partner

Step 3: partner adds name on this 2nd page + uses a different colour for feedback, tips, etc.

Step 3 (extra) : Be critical but a good peer!

Peer feedback

Round 1: structure

Are there paragraphs and also the necessary number of paragraphs (about 4 to 5)

+ word count: 250 - 300 words

Peer feedback

Round 2: opinion + support

1. Is it clear what the person's opinion is
+ 

does the person use a correct organization:

> opinion (main point or argument)

> support ( reason why)

> example (back it up with facts)

Peer feedback

Round 3: Formal writing

1. Contractions (don't, isn't, etc.)

2. Lots of pers. pronouns (pers vnw) like I, she, we, they, etc.

3. Logical structure by using linking words 

4. Variation in words (try to stay away from too, like, etc.

> Important: try not to use too many per. pronouns! Especially 'I'.

Peer feedback

Round 4: grammar + vocab

Lots of mistakes in grammar and vocabulary > write them down

Homework!

Rewrite the essay (writing task 4E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original essay

Page 2: feedback

Page 3: rewritten/retyped essay

PS. between 250 - 300 words

Optional: Listening exercise (link on Its Learning planner + task)

Thank you for paying attention!