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Poem feedback

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Why are they your 14th Goldfish – how do they inspire your future?

Personification

Difference simile and metaphor

Text

Personification

Rewrite

Rewrite due:

Tuesday 7th of November 9am

Magister assignments

WORD FORMAT!!!

Checkpoint - not completed  yet...? 

7th of November

Room 005

Mrs Theron

13:45 (70 MINUTES)

Checkpoint test common mistakes...

Fronted adverbial - adverbial of time - Later!!

Prepositional phrases

Collective noun - pack of what?

Fact/opinion. What is the difference?

Ideas not developed

Loooooooooooong sentences

Contractions/informal language

Under developed idea

You are not only helping them, but also other animals

They are really important to the foodchain.

If they are extinct, humans are in trouble.

Looooooooong sentence

The species I have chosen is the bee, I believe the bee should be saved because despite being small it makes a HUGE impact in our lives, without the bee, our forests and literally all vegetation would be grey and in case you forgot: our vegetables and fruit are vegetation, our livestock graze on grass so without bees our livestock would die, so, would we be dead too.

Action plan

Read over your feedback

Write down 2 things you will do to improve fro the JSC

Highlight these in your notebook

Send them to me via the teams assignment - I will pay attention to them during your speech test.