CARES - peer review feedback form

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• mavo, havo, vwo
• Leerjaar 1-6

Cares peer review feedback

From Excelcior online writing lab

Why peer review?

- Helps the writer and the reviewer

- Strenghtens writing skill

- Strenghtens close reading skill

Don't forget

- You are not helping when you say "it looks good"

- Attend higher order problems first:

Thesis, audience, purpose, organization, development (support)

- Then attend lower order problems:

 sentence structure, punctuation, word choice, spelling

- Write constructive and helpful comments 

Congratulate. 1. What does the writer do well in this assignment? (List one or more aspects.)
2. Also, write the writer's main claim or focus (thesis) according to what you have read.

Ask clarifying questions.

Write down what part(s) of the essay were confusing and why they were confusing.

Ask clarifying questions.
What specific suggestions (3 or fewer) do you have for revising the unclear parts of this writing? *
*suggestions see form

Request more.

What would you like to know more about the topic that can enhance the essay and that supports the thesis?

Evaluate its value.

What specific detail(s) do not work with the essay (e.g. doesn’t support the thesis) or can be moved within the essay?

Summarise.

Overall, what new information have you learned or how are you thinking differently after this reading?

Any questions? Drop them here.