To make your speech better
-Give it rhythm. A good speech has pacing.
-Vary the sentence structure. Use short sentences. Use occasional long ones to keep the audience alert. Fragments are fine if used sparingly and for emphasis.
-Use the active voice and avoid passive sentences. Active forms of speech make your sentences more powerful.
-Repeat key words and points. Besides helping your audience remember something, repetition builds greater awareness of central points or the main theme.
-Ask rhetorical questions in a way that attracts your listeners’ attention.
-Personal experiences and anecdotes help bolster your points and help you connect with the audience.
-Use quotes. Good quotes work on several levels, forcing the audience to think. Make sure quotes are clearly attributed and said by someone your audience will probably recognize.