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Dear sir Hobma,

I am writing in regards to the job application in your website.

Ill start off by introducing myself.

My name is Geoffrey Lancashire, I am 23 year old and I study at Leuven University.

This is my 4rd year.

I study leisure and management, dit is why I want to work for your company.

Now my skills: I can speak Englisch, Dutch and German and I am very good at planning.

I also like to rite books in my free time.

Two years ago I did my internship in austria.

I used to worked on the Mondays and Wednesdays at the Interlaken hotel.

I worked at the front desk and planned trips for the childs.

The guesten appreciated my services.

Now I really, want to work for your company.

I saw on you’re website that you organise holiday trips for families.

I think I would be an good candidate for the job.

I have worked in tourism before and I have the skills requird for the job.

Thank you for you consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Geoffrey Lancashire.