writing letter of appliation

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vmbo t
• Leerjaar 4

re-write the sentences

1. I saw the vacancy's on your website.

2. I follow a tourism education.

3. I am interested to get a job as entertaiment staff.

4. I have also some questions.

5. I'am ....... from The Netherlands.

6. How many do i earn for this.

7. I wanne get better at my englisch.

Hoe wordt het nagekeken?

C= aanhef en afsluiting                      1 p

I = inhoud                                                  2 p (-1 = 1 p)

T = taal                                                        2, 4, 6 of 8 p

CE = communicative effectiviteit   2 p (1 p voor alinea indeling   1p voor gebruik linking words)

Aanhef

Dear Sir/Madam,

wit regel

1.

My name is Maarten de Vries. I am a 16 year old boy from the Netherlands.

2.

I recently found your job offers on the website and I am interested in a summer job on your holiday park.  I would like to be a part of your entertainment staff.

3.

Because I am taking my final exams this year, I will have a longer holiday.

4.

Next year, I am going to do an education in tourism and because of that I would like to improve my English.

5.

This summer job would be the prefect opportunity for me.

6.

I am suitable for this job because I have already worked in a kid's club on a campsite close to our home. That is why I already have a lot of experience. I love working with kids. It gives me a lot of energy.

7.

I will be available from the 1st of June until the 5th of August.

8.

I have a few questions. Is it possible to get a place to sleep on the park or do I have to find something myself?

9/10.

How many days do I have to work every week? And how much am I going to earn?

afsluiting

wit regel

Kind Regards,

Maarten de Vries