H5B - P2 - Week 6 - Lesson 1 - Essay Feedback

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H5 - P2 - Week 6 - Lesson 1

Learning Goals

You will...

- Learn from your writing mistakes

Essay Feedback

- What do you see? 

- Things that I noticed

- Good examples

- Correct the thesis statements

- Receive feedback on your own essay

- Grading system

Good thesis examples

Therefore, teenagers should spend at least 2 hours every week visiting elderly people. 

Addressing social isolation through community programs can significantly reduce loneliness.

Loneliness among the elderly is a serious problem, but it can be reduced with more social support and better connections.

Correct the thesis statement:
So the big question is how can the government prevent problems that are caused because of the refugees.

Correct the thesis statement:
Imagine being old and lonely and there is not much possibility to connect with other elderly people around.

Learning Goals

You ...

- learned from your writing mistakes

Bye!