Stations assignment biography feedback

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Stations assignment biography feedback

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Swap your biography assignment with a partner

You are going to give your partner feedback

Read through the rubric on the planning worksheet - this will tell you what to focus on

Using full sentences, decide where in the rubric your partner is and describe why you think that.

Help? Use the reflection starters worksheet (get it from your teacher)

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In groups (see next slide)

Read over the four assignments (10 minutes per assignment)

Today

Aims

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Stations assignment

Writing plan assignment

Aims check

Aims

I can reflect on the work of a classmate using the correct language and full explanation

I can use what I have learned while reflecting to create a plan of action for my next piece of writing

Stations

In groups (see next slide)

Read over four assignments (10 minutes per assignment)

As a group (10 minutes):

Put the assignments in order from 1-4 

Decide on the feedback for the student

Write it on the feedback sheet

Use the reflection starters where needed

Which steps do you need to take?

Why are you doing this assignment

Which feedback would you give someone who didn't use paragraphs?

Which feedback would you give someone who wrote a very effective hook?

Example

Groups B2H

Jennah Zephaan Melissa Varun	Bram Mahita Angelo Sofia	Joaquin Juliet Sebastiaan Isa	Kaine Gina Wesley Zuzanna
Rheaen Lucas Jelle Latifa	Franek Joris Sophie	Levy Fitz Dexter Laurens

Groups B2F

Sri Izabella Noya	Sinead Laksha Felipe	Krystin Luiza Alex	Adam Averhea Arush
Ilya Lev Nikita	Yara Mark Prateek

Continue into the future

Effective hook

Reason for writing

Mentioning main ideas in the intro

Spelling and grammar

Leave in the past

Not writing in paragraphs

Not writing in chronological order

Stay on topic

Aims

I can reflect on the work of a classmate using the correct language and full explanation

I can use what I have learned while reflecting to create a plan of action for my next piece of writing

Plan of action

On a new page in your notebook

Write down a plan of action for yourself

How? 

Use the feedback you gave/or were given

Use the points you wrote up as a class

3 Positves - what do you do well already?

3 improvements - what should you leave in the past/improve on for the future?

Example: I am currently not fully explaining my ideas. In order to make my wrtiting clear I will need to make an effort to do this