Persuasive writing HV2 - lesson 7

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Lesson 7

In class today:

Feedback questions?

How to write an essay, recap.

Check corrected essays.

Practice.

Writing project planner

Week 2: introduction to persuasive writing

Week 3: Writing arguments

Week 4: Formative writing task

Week 5: Writing vocabulary test

Week 6: Writing arguments - repetition

Week 7: Persuasive writing test

Does anyone have questions about their feedback? Raise your hand.

What are the three parts of a persuasive essay?

What is an opening statement made up of?

Checking our corrected text.

On the next slide we have a partial story with a lot of common mistakes. On the slide after that there is the corrected version, 

Not corrected.

home work is not important cuzz kids need to explore the world so when they get older they know where they are kids also need to play outside cuzz its healty for them to braete air also when kids are in class they do verry much cuzz most lessons during 45 minutes and in the 45 minutes the need to focus the whole time and than they have verry much subjects on a day so for example somone has 6 lessons a day and only 2 braeks of an half hour al the lesson al to gether th`t are 270 minutes in a day and when they come home there wil expected from them to make home work help their parents witch cleaning or somthing and than they need to eat and then they have home work again and they go to bed at 11 am or pm idk but that is not good 

Van h2c

Not corrected.

In my opinion we dont need homework because we are at school for 8 hours a day from early in the morning until in the middle of the day and i think that if we finish it in the lessons it would be much better for the kids because we dont need more time out of school to do schoolwork because we have a life of our own and if i have homework i cant hang out with friends as much and that stops me from getting the social capabilitys that i need because i whould be in my room all the time and i whouldnt be able to make new friends or something.Also it is very stresfull because if i have a deadline and i need more time it makes me sleep less and do less good in school so its very stresfull for most people and that is worse than doing a little more work in the lessons.

van h2d

Corrected.

Homework is not important. Because, kids need to explore the world. So when they get older they know where they are. Kids also need to play outside because it is healthy for them to breathe fresh air. Also, when kids are in class they do a lot. Because most lessons are 45 minutes, and in the 45 minutes they need to focus the whole time. They have many subjects in a day. For example, someone has 6 lessons a day and only 2 breaks of half an hour, all the lesson together are 270 minutes in a day. When they come home it will be expected of them to make homework, help their parents with cleaning, or somthing else. Then they need to eat and then they have homework again before they go to bed at 11 pm which is not good.

Van h2c

Corrected.

In my opinion we don't need homework, because we are at school for 8 hours a day from early in the morning until in the middle of the day. I think that if we finish it during the lessons it would be much better for the kids, because we don't need more time out of school to do schoolwork. We have a life of our own, and if I have homework I can't hang out with friends as much. That stops me from getting the social capabilities that I need. I would be in my room all the time and I wouldn't be able to make new friends or something. Also, it is very stresfull, because, if I have a deadline and I need more time it makes me sleep less and do less well in school. So, it's very stresfull for most people, and that is worse than doing a little more work in the lessons.

van h2d

Assignment 2

On the next slides you will see signal words. Click the right part of the persuasive essay that they would be a part of. Opening, arguments or closing. 

Lastly...

1. Opening
2. Arguments
3. Closing

In summary...

1. Opening
2. Arguments
3. Closing

Write a signal word for an argument (not the one mentioned before).

Assignment 3

Persuasive writing blooket.

Next lessons

Practice for writing test - Tomorrow.

Writing Test - Next week Monday.

Assignment 3

On the next slides we have the text we looked at in week one. You are going to read the text and answer two questions. What are the 3 arguments in the text. What are the signal words in the text?

Use propper grammar, capital letters and points.

What are the signal words in the text?

What are the 3 arguments in the text?
Summarize in 1 sentence.