3h Essay & New Years

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 3

Programme today:

- Speaking/ Writing exercise 

using the past simple & future tenses +/- 20 min

- Discuss essay, common mistakes

- Individual feedback

- Work on improving essay or writing second one for feedback (on your own)

How did you spend New Year's eve?

Fill in the form and discuss with a partner

Worst experiences 2022

Best memories 2022

New Year's Resolutions

What will you do in 2023?
(3 sentences starting with I will ....)

What plans do you have for 2023?
(use ''going to'')

What parts does a five paragraph essay have?

Introduction - Match

Kids with black eyes. Kids crying themselves to sleep. Kids afraid to go to school these are just some of the things that happen when kids are bullied. 

Millions of kids are bullied in the world. They are bullied every month. They are bullied physically and emotionally, and made fun of and intimidated in person, online over phones, and almost everywhere. Not enough is being done. 

Bullying should be punished by a fine or jail time because it is too prevalent, it leaves long-lasting emotional and academic scars, and it can lead to suicide. In addition, fines and jail time will prevent further bullying. 

Hook

Background info

Thesis statement

One question I still have is..

I feel well-prepared for the test

yes

a little

no

Individual feedback:

Azure highlight: abbreviation or informal language

Yellow: Grammatical or language error

Pink: tips to improve , add points for organisation

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