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essay-(peer)feedback
essay-(peer)feedback
Today:
- quick recap
- look at own practice essays
- look at essays from last year
- what are we looking for in an essay and why?
- if time left: portfolio
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Tekstslide
Engels
Middelbare school
vwo
Leerjaar 4
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essay-(peer)feedback
Today:
- quick recap
- look at own practice essays
- look at essays from last year
- what are we looking for in an essay and why?
- if time left: portfolio
Slide 1 - Tekstslide
Who submitted a practice essay?
yes
no
ChatGPT did it
Slide 2 - Poll
(I knew the answer)
Well done to those who submitted. Seriously well done!
And I am sure you know what I am going to say to those who did not
Slide 3 - Tekstslide
Argumentative essay?
Slide 4 - Woordweb
If you wrote your essay
Look at my feedback
See what you can improve
Look at your neighbour's work, see what they are up to
- can you help?
- can you learn?
If you did not write an essay
DO NOW
Look at the neighbour's work, see what they are up to
- can you help?
- can you learn?
timer
10:00
timer
5:00
Slide 5 - Tekstslide
The rubric: 4 items. What do you think we are looking for?
Level of content and development of arguments
Grammar and vocabulary
Style and organization
Format
Slide 6 - Tekstslide
Now sit in groups of 4
you get three essays (student work from last year)
you get three rubrics
you get this task:
Rank G-V-O
Explain why/discuss---> write and underline!
Use the rubric to guide you
I will ask one of you to speak for the group
timer
15:00
Slide 7 - Tekstslide
Let's discuss
- what did you think?
- tips
- tops
- would this be a pass or not? Why?
Slide 8 - Tekstslide
Last bit of lesson
CHOICE
- work on your dossier
- read your book
- revisit your essay
Slide 9 - Tekstslide
Before you go
Thumbs up, down, half: confident about the essay?
Next Friday last class:
Anything you want me to revisit? Explain? Talk about books? Practice using quotes? Practice analysis? Read beautiful poetry to you?
Don't forget to PRINT your dossier
Slide 10 - Tekstslide
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