January Test Week- handy check list for writing the essay

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 2

Quick check for the Writing Paper

• Read through the notes on essay writing in the booklet you were given at the start of the year that explains how to do the writing tasks.
• Look at the feedback and corrections on the written assignments that you have done on essays in class
• Use this lesson up  to refresh your memory on how the essay task should be done

Choose the best option: You must write an essay of between

1. 120 - 180 words
2. 140 - 190 words
3. You can write as much as you can in 40 minutes
4. Write as much as you can in 60 minutes

Choose the best option: In Part One of the exam (Essay) you

1. can write whatever you want.
2. must deal with three points given in the task
3. must deal with 3 points, one of which is your own idea

Choose the best option: In Part One of the exam you should...

1. write a plan first
2. just start writing your answer

Choose the best option: In Part One of the exam you

1. should check your answer carefully when you finish
2. won't have time to check your answer

Part One - An essay

In Pairs: Read the task on the slide below and the ESSAY QUESTION  on the next slide underline the points you must deal with. 

In your English class you have been talking about how much teenagers should help with housework.

Now your teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your points of view

Essay Question

Teenagers and young people should share housework equally with their parents. Do you agree? 

Notes

Write about: 

1. who has more time for housework
2. who does housework better
3. ...............(your own idea)

Work in groups

Discuss the task and try to find two or three things you can say about each of the notes 1-3

Complete the plan for the essay by matching the notes (a-e) with the paragraphs (1-5)

Para 1: intro .....................

Para 2: ..............................

Para 3: ...............................

     Para 4: ..................................

    Para 5: conclusion.............

a.  life more enjoyable doing things together

b. time: young people studying, parents working, chores finished more quickly

c. get practice, you improve

d. sharing work together and better family life (my opinion)

e.  parents do most of it 

Answers: 

Slide 8: Suggested underlining: Teenagers and young people, share housework equally with their parents,  agree, who has more time for housework, who better, own idea. 

Slide 10: Para 1:e -Para 2: b - Para 3: c - Para 4: a - Para 5: d

Remember:

No subheadings in essay

Language is semi-formal

Use words such as, Firstly, Secondly, Finally to lead in your ideas.

Use language that expresses your opinion: I believe, In my view, In my opinion, I think

How to write the essay.

• Read the essay question and prompts VERY carefully. Then you will know what you have to do. (25% of the marks!!!!)
• It is important to keep the focus of the question and that ALL your ideas and opinions are relevant to the question.
• Support your opinions with reasons and examples.
• Think of a third idea of your own.
• Ideas need to be expressed in a clear and logical way.

It is advisable to use 5 paragraphs

Introduction (Don't express your opinion here)

Topic sentence 1 + reason(s)/example(s) 

Topic sentence 2 + reason(s)/example(s)

Topic sentence 3 + reason(s)/example(s) (own idea)

Conclusion: sumarise your ideas and you may include your opinion here

Remember: 140 - 190 words

Sample layout

(Introduction)  Current research shows that in most households parents are doing most of the housework. 

(Topic sentence 1) TIME:  young people studying, parents working, chores finished more quickly

(Topic sentence 2)  BETTER; get practice, you improve (GIVE EXAMPLES)

(Topic sentence 3)  OWN IDEA;  Life is more enjoyable doing things together

(Conclusion:) sharing work together and better family life SAY WHETHER YOU AGREE here

Write a paragraph! 

(Introduction) Current research shows that in most households parents are doing most of the housework. 

(Topic sentence 1) TIME: Firstly, young people studying, parents working, chores finished more quickly

(Topic sentence 2) BETTER; In addition, get practice, you improve (GIVE EXAMPLES)

(Topic sentence 3) OWN IDEA; Finally/ Furthermore, Life is more enjoyable doing things together

(Conclusion:)  On balance / To sum up, sharing work together and better family life SAY WHETHER YOU AGREE here

Now you try

Either in pairs or individually, attempt one of the "new" essay questions. 

• Underline the important aspects of the essay task.
• Make a plan
• Write an essay