4T giving feedback (Writing)

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vmbo t
• Leerjaar 4

Welcome all

Today:

Zakelijke brief, feedback

How to give feedback

*Tip

Finish your letter

You will now get 

10 min. 

to finish your letter. 

How to give feedback

- Lay-out + paragraphs

- language 

- 'special' about formal letter 

Language

isn't  = is not

i = I 

gonna = going to

zinsvolgorde: wie doet wat waar wanneer

Step 2:

Punctuation + capital letters

Check if the letter has commas, full-stops, capital letters (also I!) 

Also check for 'paragraphs'. 

Step 3:

Inhoud, now you check the actual letter. 

- First paragraph: 

Why you write, who you are, etc. 

Check the language too. (spelling+volgorde)

Step 4:

Second paragraph: 

-main points + 'maatregelen' and arguments 

+ opinion

Step 5:

Last part:

'Thank you for your time' / I'm looking forward to hear from you, etc. 

+ 

afsluiting (yours faithfully,). Let op komma!

That's it. 

Ruil terug. 

Lees de feedback door en stel eventueel vragen. 

Kijk zelf ook nog goed naar je product. Misschien vallen er nog zaken op. 

New assignment / choice

Writing assignment 5

Lost stuffed animals

Option 2

Same letter (alcohol use)

Write it again with all of the feedback.