Fight Club Lesson 10

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Fight Club

Lesson 10

In Class Today

Essay writing

Peer feedback rounds

Essay

Hand in your essay on THURSDAY 8 OCTOBER before 23.59

4H3

Group 1: Tessel, Isa, Casey, Damian, Ayat

Group 2: Helin, Maud, Sophie, Arwen, Maite

Group 3: Jools, Dries, Shivano, Auke, Diedrik

Group 4: Sophia, Tessa, Madelief, Skip, Rudolf

Zoe / Nika

4H2

Group 1: Joy, Floor, Norah, Julia

Group 2: Ouassim, Ties, Sam, Rafael

Group 3: Nieke, Laura, Silija,  Cato

Group 4: Floris, Jonas, Zion, Primo, Rijk

Group 5: Basar, Adam, Jassem

Group 6: Zeger, Krister

Essay Writing

Remember?

Introduction (par.1) - introducing your main idea and thesis statement

Body (par.2, par.3, par.4) - 3 supporting arguments 

Conclusion (par.5) - summary of all your arguments 

Peer feedback - round 1

• underline the thesis statement in the introduction
  
• underline the topic sentences in §2 / §3 / §4
• write down what you really liked about the essay and what you would change

Peer feedback - round 2

• underline evidence and examples that support the topic sentences 
• underline important transitional words (e.g. however, for this reason, for example, because, consequently, besides, in addition)

Peer feedback - round 3

Fill in the following outline:

- This essay is about ........................

- The writer's opinion on the subject is .....................

- This essay is introduced by the following interesting info .......

- This essay's thesis statement is ...........................

- To summarize this essay has show that .................

- This essay is concluded by the following interesting info .......

Peer feedback - round 4

- Title?

- Grammar, punctuation and spelling?

- List of sources

HOMEWORK

Process the feedback you got today