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20 September
  1. Period 1 - write essay. Assignment is in teams. 
  2. Period 2 - Of Course 1.1 Reading and grammar
  3. Global planner periods 1 and 2
  4. Study guide for SE in P&T 2

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20 September
  1. Period 1 - write essay. Assignment is in teams. 
  2. Period 2 - Of Course 1.1 Reading and grammar
  3. Global planner periods 1 and 2
  4. Study guide for SE in P&T 2

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8 September
  1. Logging in pt 2.  OC and lessonsup!
  2. Planner P1 (P2)
  3. Vocab WRTS - link via mail.
  4. OC useful grammar for Essay writing/revision.
  5. Find a book in the library. Check with HVL before you start.

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Most common mistakes in paragraphs
  1. Using first person singular - I
  2. Informal vocabulary get-like-a lot 
  3. Contractions
  4. No PED
  5.  Starting sentences with and-but-also-yet

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28 September 2022
1. Most common mistakes from Essay 1
2. Thesis statements
3. Grammar OC 1.2
4. Write essay 2

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Informality
a. Can 
b. Make a big deal about it
c. Can help
d. Overpopulation is a threat.
e. Big
f. Such a lot of

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Consistency in vocabulary
What is inconsistent in this sentence?
This growth is not only caused by the growing birthrate, but also by a large number of immigrants. 

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 Starting sentences with 
And
But
So
Yet
Also
Because
Where this is totally unnecessary.


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Run-on sentences 
2 or more independent clauses which are not connected properly. 
Usually a Punctuation issue
a. Colon
b. Semi-colon
c. Full stop

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Rambling
a. Putting too much info into your introduction/paragraph.
b. Stick to the point.
c. Plan before you write!!! and then stick to it. 

Introduction structure to avoid rambling:
 Hook reader with good point/anecdote/statistics
 Restate the prompt/subject
 Write your thesis statement


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29 September 2022
Prep for next week:
1. Attitude words
2. Passives
3. In pairs/threes prep for next week's essay

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Attitude words
Words that clearly indicate a tone or opinion 
1. Do ex 10
2. in groups make a list of at least 20 positive and 20 negative attitude words that you could use in a formal essay.

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Grammar - passives

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Passives
Do ex. 11


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Homework
Prepare for essay 3

Do ex. 12 and 13. Make sure you bring your notes to class!

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5 October
1. 2.3 ex. 12 any questions?
2. Grading
3. Peer evaluation essay 2
4. Writing essay in groups

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5 October
You should have prepared 2.3 ex 12/13
In groups write a 4§ essay (note 4 not 7 as in the book!)
Note ex 14. Your essay must include these items. Underline them!!
Who is willing to go online and work with Norah?

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Next week
Next week I will be in Bonn with H5. You must do and complete the work in teams/Som! 
At least 1 individual essay which I will mark for you as if it was a real essay. 

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