“The ship sank”
Yann Martel highlights that in his novel, the sinking of the Tsimtsum is communicated in just three words: “The ship sank.” Although there is a brief description of the immediate aftermath, the narrative swiftly moves on to Pi. (This moment can be found on p. 97)
In the film and theatre version, the storytelling requires the sinking of the ship to be presented in a visual way. Martel comments that the film version of Life of Pi depicts the sinking in a richly visual, extended, and very dramatic scene.
TASK: In exactly 100 words, re-write a prose description of the ship sinking that could easily be turned into a film or theatre scene. Focus on using strong visual imagery in your writing, and aim to use at least three of the following techniques:
• Similarity or metaphor
• Personification
• Alliteration
• The five senses