Common mistakes students make in articles
The language is too formal and more suited to essays. Avoid words like:
to sum up, some people say, nevertheless,
They don't use quotes or examples
They either use not enough, or too many, questions. The questions, called rhetorical questions because they don't require an answer, shouldn't be more than one per paragraph.
Good examples are:
Have you ever ……..?
What do you think about ……..?
Are you one of those people who thinks that ……?
What would life be like if ……?
Will the future bring us ….. ?