Week 23 Essay Writing Lessons: Peer feedback on outline second essay

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Lesduur is: 45 min

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Today's plan

1) At the end of this class, you will have provided each other with peer feedback on the outlines for practice essay 2 on BNW and THT

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Flashback

Which paragraph should contain the most important argument of your essay?

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1:00

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Guidelines arguments

- Structure your arguments in a way that the final argument is the most important. Make sure that the two previous arguments lead up to this final argument.

- Do your arguments provide an answer to your question? If not, you may have to be more specific, cut out the details and be more focussed.

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What are you writing about in your essay for the question:
How is education considered a means of manipulation in BNW and THT?

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The plan for this week

Monday: outline ready so that classmates can provide feedback.

Tuesday: no class

Thursday: final changes on your essay

Friday : hand in for teacher feedback

If you want to check your essay question for the pto 4, I will provide you with feedback. You can do this up until the test.

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Practice Essay 2

Essay question:

How is education considered a means of manipulation in Brave New World and The Handmaid's Tale?

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peer feedback duos:

1. Soemaya - Sandy 8. Sultan - Melyat

2.Ebrar - Yagmur 9. Wiktoria - Naoual

3.Bin - Tasnime 10. Safae - Mariam

4.Jianhao - Asma 11. Selin - Joudi

5. Dewi - Basem

6. Elif - Zahrah

7. Riem- Nayab

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15:00

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Checklist

- Check each other's arguments.

- Use the essay outline to guide you and keep in mind that the arguments should give an answer to the question. Are the 3 arguments clear and focussed enough for an essay of 600-800 words? Give 3 positive comments and 2 possible improvements. I expect you to help eachother and exchange thoughts.