For example, compare these two paragraphs:
"The girl looked out the window. While looking out the window, the girl noticed a little cat. The cat she noticed was not fat. It was very much not fat."
"The girl looked out the window. While glancing outside, she noticed a little kitty. The kitten she saw was not fat. It was skinny, and not chubby at all."
Lesson duration is: 45 min
