V6B Essay feedback/practice/One Flew

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V6B Essay feedback/practice

Goals:

1. language in essay writing

2. from plan to essay

3. themes from the book

4. One Flew part one and two; quote analysis!

Give synonyms for good and bad

Give synonyms for very/a lot of

Write 10 conjunctions (voegwoorden) aka linking words that are common in essay writing

Why is the second E in PEE so important in essay writing?

Do not use we/I/you in translation, hand in in next slide, 

4 mins

 Door de intense droogte hebben we de laatste jaren steeds meer bosbranden. We hebben te weinig geinvesteerd in het brandweerkorps waardoor het bestrijden van branden lastig wordt. De regering moet maatregelen treffen om in de toekomst te zorgen dat er voldoende capaciteit is.

Hand in your translation, without use of I/we etc.

One Flew: describe the mental hospital

Questions

1. Which 2 groups of patients are mentioned?

2. How are they different?

3. What had happened to Ellis?

4. When the Fog clears...explain....

5. Describe McMurphy: which group/why?

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Submit answers 1-5

Harding is

1. a main character who abused his wife
2. A man who was in the Chronics department
3. an intelligent man with an illiterate wife
4. a man whose wife has left him for a neighbour

The black boys were selected by Ms Ratched because

1. they are racists and love abusing the patients
2. the clinic has a diversity policy with positive discrimination
3. they work much harder than white staff
4. they can easily be bossed around

Which patients are Acutes?

Which patients are Chronics?

1. Ruckly, Billy, Ellis
2. Chief Bromden, Ruckly, Ellis
3. Ruckly, Matterson, Ellis
4. Matterson, Bromden, Cheswick

1. Who has been on Chronics longest?
2. Bromden is not an Indian name, how come?

One Flew over the Cuckoo's Nest

What can you deduct from this image?

How does their relationship develop?

How does relationship McMurphy - Chief Bromden develop?

General questions:

1. Why did MCM end up in mental hospital?

2. Describe the Big Nurse.

3. What is Ms Ratched's estimation of MCM?

4. How are MCM and Ms R similar?

5. How does Ms R acquire her staff? 

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What is the Combine?

Chief Bromden often has flashbacks. What cam you tell about the imagery in this quote and what does it represent?

All those spindles reeling and wheeling and shuttles jumping around and bobbins wringing the air with string, whitewashed walls and steel-gray machines and girls in flowered skirts skipping back and forth, and the whole thing webbed with flowing white lines stringing the factory together...

"She is running like a big, accurate machine" > explain

What happens in group meetings?

Mention a theme discussed in the novel and illustrate with an example

What is meant by the fog-machine?

Taber had EST treatment.
Explain and what led up to it?

What is a motif and which motifs are prominent throughout the novel and what do they represent?

Wrap up: find a photo reflecting the novel (theme/character/setting)

assignment

You now have 30 minutes to (together with your group) analyse 5 quotes from the novel. Answer the following questions:

1. what is going on in the quote and who is the speaker?

2. which theme/symbol can you relate this quote to (see hand-out)

3. Which of the 5 quotes do you (as a group) find most striking?