This lesson contains 11 slides, with text slides and 2 videos.
Items in this lesson
Slide 1 - Slide
We are going to:
- hand in your writing on the smart phone video so that I can give you feedback on it - watch 2 clips from the Jimmy Fallon Show (13') - choose a writing exercise & discuss vocab. (5') - write (10') - give feedback (10') - rewrite (10') - evaluatie: wat heb je geleerd vandaag? (2') - keuzewerktijd (20')
Slide 2 - Slide
Slide 3 - Video
Slide 4 - Video
Choose your option:
A) Write a fictional conversation between Emma & Jimmy that took place after the show B) Write a fictional story about Emma preparing for the contest with a friend C) Write story in which two people discuss Adam’s performance. (For example: One of them loved it and the other one hated it.) D) The producers of the show have to cut one game. Write a story in which they are discussing which game should stay.
Slide 5 - Slide
Vocabulary:
Welke woorden en zinnen heb je nodig om je verhaal te kunnen schrijven?
Slide 6 - Slide
Write your story
- Zorg voor structuur: opening, middenstuk, einde - Pak je beoordelingsformulier erbij zodat je weet waar je op moet letten
Slide 7 - Slide
Swap and give each other feedback
- 3 compliments (or more) - suggestions (what could make it better?) - corrections (grammar, spelling, interpunction)
Slide 8 - Slide
Rewrite
and share?
Slide 9 - Slide
Maak notities in je schrift:
- Wat heb je geleerd vandaag?
Slide 10 - Slide
Keuze werk tijd
- Werken uit je boek - Je schrijfopdracht verbeteren door mijn feedback te verwerken
