H4 P2 W6 giving feedback + writing about characters

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 4

What do I expect of you?

• Do your work!
• Try to speak as much English as possible. 
• Be mindful, respectful & communicate!
• Be on time: more than 5 minutes = too late. 
• Raise your hand if you have a question and be silent during explanations of me/student. 
• Phones are in your bags, bags are on the floor.
• No eating or drinking in the classroom (gum included), water is allowed. 

Read your book

learning goals

I can give clear feedback on a classmate's writing assignment. 

I can write about about a specific part of my reading book. 

When correcting a writing, what can you give feedback on?

Content

Grammar

Spelling

Structure

Amount of words

Vocabulary

Fluency

Form

Style

Tone

Types of feedback: 

"It's not good and it looks ugly"

Types of feedback: 

"It's not good and it looks ugly"

"It needs some work, you made some spelling errors such as "there" instead of "their". Also, don't forget the capital I when you are talking about yourself." 

Give feedback on this poster. Both something that is good and something that can be improved.

Give feedback on this poster. Both something that is good and something that can be improved.

Now it is your turn..

• Give each other feedback: the person in front you gives you their writing and you give it to the person behind you.  
• Give written feedback. Circle any spelling/grammar mistakes you see and write down general tips which will help improve their writing. 
• Fill in the rubric based on your feedback.
• Remember: write something good and something that can be improved.

Now it is your turn...

• Give each other verbal feedback.
• Talk to the person you gave feedback to and discuss your feedback.  
• Correct your writing based on what they told you. 

What grade did you get?

• Total possible points = 20

What can we talk about when describing a character of a book?

Describing a character

• Round or flat character?
• Protagonist / antagonist
• Physical appearance
• Emotions
• What do they do in the story?
• Relationship with other characters

Write!

Write about your favorite or least favorite character in the book

write about 70 words 

learning goals

I can give clear feedback on a classmate's writing assignment. 

I can write about about a specific part of my reading book. 

Holmwoods

Go to Somtoday--> leermiddelen --> English Essentials --> start learning

Every week: do 2 reading exercises and 2 listening exercises