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Middelbare school
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Leerjaar 4
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Welcome all
Slide 1 - Slide
Today:
Zakelijke brief, feedback
How to give feedback
*Tip
Slide 2 - Slide
Finish your letter
You will now get
10 min.
to finish your letter.
Slide 3 - Slide
How to give feedback
- Lay-out + paragraphs
- language
- 'special' about formal letter
Slide 4 - Slide
Language
isn't
= is not
i = I
gonna
= going to
zinsvolgorde: wie doet wat waar wanneer
Slide 5 - Slide
Step 2:
Punctuation + capital letters
Check if the letter has commas, full-stops, capital letters (also I!)
Also check for 'paragraphs'.
timer
2:00
Slide 6 - Slide
Step 3:
Inhoud, now you check the actual letter.
- First paragraph:
Why you write, who you are, etc.
Check the language too. (spelling+volgorde)
timer
2:00
Slide 7 - Slide
Step 4:
Second paragraph:
-main points + 'maatregelen' and arguments
+ opinion
timer
2:00
Slide 8 - Slide
Step 5:
Last part:
'Thank you for your time' / I'm looking forward to hear from you, etc.
+
afsluiting (yours faithfully,). Let op komma!
timer
2:00
Slide 9 - Slide
That's it.
Ruil terug.
Lees de feedback door en stel eventueel vragen.
Kijk zelf ook nog goed naar je product. Misschien vallen er nog zaken op.
Slide 10 - Slide
New assignment / choice
Writing assignment 5
Lost stuffed animals
Slide 11 - Slide
Option 2
Same letter (alcohol use)
Write it again with all of the feedback.
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