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Mastering Peer Assessment: Fun and Creative Writing Feedback
Mastering Peer Assessment: Writing Feedback
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Mastering Peer Assessment: Writing Feedback
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Learning Objective
At the end of the lesson you will know how to peer assess writing effectively.
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Why is peer assessment a good thing?
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Why Peer Assessment?
Helps improve writing skills and builds confidence. Encourages collaboration and learning from peers.
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The Success Criteria
We are looking to see that
our 'peer' has managed to
achieve the success criteria.
That is our main goal.
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What does 'horror
related literary
techniques'
include?
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Read Carefully
Read the writing from start to finish without stopping. Understand the story or main message.
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Spot the Positives
Find at least one or two things you liked. Share these positive points with the writer.
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Detail Check
Look for areas needing more explanation or examples. Suggest where details could enhance understanding.
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Spot Mistakes Politely
Check for spelling and grammar errors. Use kind words when suggesting corrections.
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Flow of Writing
Does the writing flow smoothly? Suggest adding paragraphs if needed.
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Ask Questions
If confused, write a question to the writer. Ask for clarification where needed.
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Make Suggestions
Offer ideas for improvement, like a stronger opening or fun detail to add.
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Be Kind and Encouraging
Always end with something positive. Highlight what was done well.
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Interactive Activity: Spot the Mistakes
Find any spelling mistakes and underline them in purple/pink.
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Interactive Activity: Spot the Mistakes
Find any grammatical mistakes and underline them in yellow/orange.
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Fill out the Success Criteria
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Two Stars and a Wish
Identify at least two positive aspects and one thing to improve upon (two stars and a wish).
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Review Your Feedback
Ensure comments are clear and helpful. Would your feedback help if you were the writer?
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Reflect and Share
What did you learn about giving feedback? Share one takeaway with the class.
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