Review writing Y3 lesson 3
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Welcome!
Phone in yellow box
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Today: review lesson 3
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10 MINUTES SILENT READING
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review lesson 3
Today's goals:
At the end of this lesson you:
- know how your review will be assessed
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In pairs
Decide: who student A, who student B?
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In pairs, in English
Student A:Tell student B what we talked about last lesson Student B: add 1 thing we did or you've learned last lesson
Student A: tell what film/series you've reviewed
Student B: say what you found difficult with review writing
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Writing plan
- Who is the audience?
boss, stranger, friend etc
- What do you want to achieve?
amuse, inform, convince someone of your opinion
- Which ideas to include or leave out? (not confusing the reader)
-How to organise your ideas? (structure)
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Organising your ideas into clear paragraphs
- one 1 main idea per paragraph
- don't try to put in too much in 1 paragraph
- no min length per paragraph - just make your point
- paragraph starts with topic sentence
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Tips
- in 2nd going through: spelling, interpunction etc
- can I use nicer words?
- try more difficult things and making a mistake gets you more points than correct, but very simple (no. of mistakes says noting about your grade)
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Let's look at the assessment rubric together!
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Writing/booktest
booktest, so you need to have finished your book
Allowed: book+dictionary
Assessment rubric (reader)
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Give peer feeback
Read the review of partner & write down feedback b k
15 mins
In English, discuss the feedback. Peer gives 3 tips,
then talk about it. 5 mins for both reviews!
After 5 mins: together, try to improve the reviews
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Wed 17-1 : Writing/booktest
booktest, so you need to have finished your book
Allowed: book+dictionary
You need to know the paragraph structure!
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review lesson 3
Today's goals:
At the end of this lesson you:
- know how your review will be assessed
Stand up if....
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Wed 17-1 : Writing/booktest
booktest, so you need to have finished your book
Allowed: book+dictionary
You need to know the paragraph structure!
next lesson = 30 mins, synonyms extra, 20 mins reading lesson, so bring book
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Extra
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Slide 16 - Video
www.grammarly.com
Slide 17 - Link
www.wordstream.com
