Unit 1: Feedback on your review

• English
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 2

Review of the  Review !

Exam Task

Plan

Good 

If you had a catchy title, had used paragraphs to organise your ideas and answered the question properly, ( was your review about an activity in the local area suitable for teenagers?) AND you remembered to recommend it, then you will see a G in SOM Today. 

• Please use the Review check list to evaluate your partner's review.
• Hand back in to Mrs Corrigan along with your review 

Feedback on Review writing

CONTENT	ORGANISATION
COMMUNICATIVE ACHIEVEMENT	LANGUAGE

Mainly done well

LAYOUT: 

Introduction

Description

Discussion

Recommendation

Mainly done well

Interesting title to catch the reader's attention

Correct tone: Friendly and chatty. Use of shortened forms: Couldn't / Shouldn't / We've / I'd / They'd

Spelling Bloopers

Realy 

Awfull

helpfull

beautifull

exiting

Verry

Grammatical Bloopers

It was very fun.

Use of "there" for possession:

We ate at their house.

There is only one dog at home

Grammar Bloopers

• Not enough use of the Past tense, especially the Present Perfect.
• Too much repetition of words like fun, nice , good
• It was very fun 
• Small i instead of I for first person (Ik)
• Write numbers under ten out in full. 

Needs attention

Write a very clear plan before you start writing your review...

You wouldn't set off on a journey to a new place without (Google) maps!

Useful language for a Review

Now: Copy the useful language in to your notebook

Giving an opinion:

From my point of view, ....

What I loved/hated about it was .....

I'd say that ....

The best part was ....

Making recommendations

I'd certainly /definitely /really /strongly recommend it.

All in all,....

You should definitely give it a go.