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www.flo-joe.co.uk
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www.englishrevealed.co.uk
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Essay: Mainly done really well
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Minor Essay Bloopers
Public School
Private School
State
School
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Than is used in comparisons as a conjunction (as in "she is younger than I am") and as a preposition ("he is taller than me"). Then indicates time. It is used as an adverb ("I lived in Zwaag then"), noun ("we'll have to wait until then")
You don't need to bike to school.
You don't need to cycle to school.
Use bike/bicycle as a noun and cycle as a verb!
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MAJOR ESSAY BLOOPERS
No inclusion of your own idea
Forgot to use an introduction
Forgot to write the conclusion
Using Because/And/But to start a sentence.
Use of informal language such as - *Kids / way better/ etc
*Classmates / offspring / child / children / students / pupils / youngsters / youth/ young people.
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Informal letter/email
Hi or Hello
Bye / From / Best Wishes / Love
Remember to:
include all the information you are asked for.
chatty informal language
Thank them for writing
Hey
Greetings
Remember not to:
use a small letter i for first person.
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Story
Remember to:
Look at where the "sentence" needs to be - start or finish of your story
Lesson duration is: 40 min
