V6A 08-03-2024

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 4

Mock literary essay --> peer feedback

Before we start

Laptops closed and coats off, please!

Do you have all your materials with you today? 😊

Is your gum in the bin?

Lesson Set-Up

Welcome + Attendance 

Lesson goals (5 min.)

/  Instructions for the literary oral 

• Questions left? (10 min.) (together)

/ Mock literary essay:

• Go and sit with a peer who is not your literary buddy;
• Swap essays;
• Read each other's essay + give a top and a tip;
• Then, take the rubric (See SOM) and fill it in; 
• Lastly, give your peer a grade based on your findings + give specific tips for improvement based on the rubric. (30 min.) (pair work/individually)

 / Done? --> Rewrite your essay / Polish it up a bit more (? min.)

Homework:
Good luck rewriting your essay for the class session + submit it on SOM (not specifically for feedback, though) 

Lesson Goals

Explain in your own words:

• Set-up literary oral (1st 5 min. especially);
• Grade + feedback received from your peer.

Body of the lesson

In the next 40-ish min., we'll focus on the next exercise:

Together:

/ Instructions for the literary oral

• Questions left? (10 min.)

Individually / Pair work:

/ Mock literary essay:

• Go and sit with a peer who is not your literary buddy;
  
• Swap essays;
  
• Read each other's essay + give a top and a tip;
  
• Then, take the rubric (See SOM) and fill it in;
  
• Lastly, give your peer a grade based on your findings + give specific tips for improvement based on the rubric. (30 min.)

 / Done? --> Rewrite your essay / Polish it up a bit more (? min.)

Lesson Goals Check

Explain in your own words:

• Set-up literary oral (1st 5 min. especially);
  
• Grade + feedback received from your peer.

Homework

Good luck rewriting your essay for the class session + submit it on SOM (not specifically for feedback, though) 

Class dismissed!😊

Name the linking words that indicate that an example is being given

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Name the linking words that indicate contradiction

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Name the linking words that indicate possibility