24-09-10 schrijftoets feedback

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• mavo
• Leerjaar 4

Writing check

For every sentence, try and identify the mistake and write a better sentence.

My mom works on a school and my brother sit on school.

My mom works at a school and my brother goes to school.

i'm 15 years old

I'm 15 years old.

I am born in 2009.

I was born in 2009.

I have a nice family with parents and stepparents I got 2 step sisters and 1 stepbrother my parents ar 43 and 52, I don't know the ages of my stepparents my stepbrother is 15 years old and my stepsisters 23 and 18.

I have a nice family with parents and step-parents. I have 2 stepsisters and 1 stepbrother. My parents are 43 and 52, but I don't know the ages of my step-parents. My stepbrother is 15 years old and my stepsisters are 23 and 18.

What I do in my free time is sporting

I like to do sports in my free time.

Did you travel? So yeah where?

Have you travelled before? If so, where to?

Did you travel during the summer? If so, where to?

My character traits are active, nice, honest, helpfull and thoughtfull.

Ful als toevoeging op woorden!

I find myself funny.

I think I am very funny.

I consider myself funny.

I go every year to Turkey.

I go to Turkey every year.

Every year I go to Turkey.

At home I game a lot.

At home I like to play games.

At places with a lot of people I am most of the time very quiet.

When I am at places with a lot of people I am quiet most of the time.

Most of the time when I am at places with a lot of people I am quiet.

I follow these classes this year: maths, english, netherlands, economy and PE.

I have these classes this year: maths, English, Dutch, economics and PE.

...I am to honest to them.

I am too honest to them.

I love to play hockey because I get to learn new tricks. And I love to hang out with my friends because it's always really fun.

I love to play hockey because I get to learn new tricks, and I love to hang out with my friends because it's always really fun.