Week 2 - les 1 en 2 (Writing)

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vmbo t
• Leerjaar 3

Lesson Plan 1

Part 1: SE Schrijfvaardigheid: Informal E-mail

- Introduction

- What is important? & What are you going to learn?

Part 2: Learn about e-mail format

- read/work on page 3, 4 and 6

- Work on page 5

Part 3: Writing assignment 1

- Answer Ben's e-mail: page 7 and write on page 8

Goal:

You know how to write an informal e-mail

SE Schrijfvaardigheid: informele e-mail

What is it? / When is it?

- writing test: your are going to write e-mail in English (SE)

- Test date: Wednesday 7th of February
What do you need to do for it?
- writing module (reader) to practise and prepare for your test + notebook

- dictionary (supplied by school)
What will we practise?
- e-mail format (rules to write an e-mail)

- spelling, grammar, phrases you can use

What is important & what are you going to learn?

1. Conventions
2. Start / Close
3. Paragraphs
4. Interpunction
5. Grammar
6. Word Order

SE writing: formal e-mail

•  Format: Informal e-mail
  
• Together: Read and work on page 3-6
• By yourself assignment 5

Email #1

From: (…)

To: [e-mail]

Cc/bcc:

Subject: Meet each other

Hi Ben!

How are you? I’m doing well. It is nice to hear from you. I like it that you are coming to Holland. My parents think it’s a good idea, you're very welcome!

When you are in Holland, I will show you Amsterdam. We can make a bicycle ride, that's typically Dutch. Our holiday starts on 22nd of April till 3rd may. Let me know in which week you can come.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Bye,

Email #2

From: [e-mail]

to: [e-mail]

Hallo,

How are you doing I'm good. It's nice to hear from you. I found it very nice that you to Holland come . When you are in Holland, I show you Amsterdam. We can make a bicycel trip. That is typical Netherlands. Our summer holiday start on 20 April until 3rd of May. Let me know in with weak you're coming I hope to hear soon from you

greetz

(…)

Compare and write down the succescriteria: 

Assignment page 5

Email #1

From: (…)

To: [e-mail]

Cc/bcc:

Subject: Meet each other

Hi Ben!

How are you? I’m doing well. It is nice to hear from you. I like it that you are coming to Holland. My parents think it’s a good idea, you're very welcome!

When you are in Holland, I will show you Amsterdam. We can make a bicycle ride, that's typically Dutch. Our holiday starts on 22nd of April till 3rd may. Let me know in which week you can come.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Bye,

Email #2

From: [e-mail]

to: [e-mail]

Hallo,

How are you doing I'm good. It's nice to hear from you. I found it very nice that you to Holland come . When you are in Holland, I show you Amsterdam. We can make a bicycel trip. That is typical Netherlands. Our summer holiday start on 20 April until 3rd of May. Let me know in with weak you're coming I hope to hear soon from you

greetz

(…)

1. Conventies

2. Start / close

3. Alinea's

4. Spelling

SE writing: formal e-mail

Answer Ben's e-mail (from page 4)

- Writing assignment 1: page 7

- Write your e-mail in your notebook

- You can use dictionary to look for the words you don't know

- Write these words in your notebook

Lesson Plan 2

Part 1: Start / What did we do last lesson? (20 mins)

- Look back on previous lesson

- personal E-mail format Quiz

Part 2: Check writing assignment 1 (page 7/8) (20 mins)

- Compare your e-mail with a classmate / fill in page 9

- Check your own e-mail with the example e-mail 

Part 3: Write e-mail #2

- Read / work on page 10

- In pairs write writing assignment 2 (p. 11) on seperate paper

Goal:

Check your own writing skills with succescriteria to improve your writing

Lesson Plan

E-mail format Quiz

Goal:

Your e-mail format knowledge

What's the correct conventions order?

1. from - to - cc/bcc - subject - attachment
2. to - from - cc/bcc - subject - attachment
3. Subject - from - to - cc/bcc - attachment
4. to - from - cc/bcc - attachment - subject

What do you write/type in the "cc/bcc" section?

1. your own e-mail address
2. recipient e-mail address (person you're sending it to)
3. email address that needs a copy of the e-mail
4. a file you're sending with your e-mail

What do you write/type in the "subject" section?

1. your own e-mail address
2. recipient e-mail address (person you're sending it to)
3. a file you're sending with your e-mail
4. the topic of your e-mail

From:

To:

Cc/bcc:

subject:

attachment

Dear Ben,

regards, 

Lisa

Hope to hear from you soon,

Starting a message

closing a message

Kind regards,

June

Yours,

Derreck

Dear Peter,

Love,

Your sister

Hi Josie!

All the best,

John

Hi there!

Bye!

Vertaal de zin:
Hoe gaat het met je? Met mij gaat het goed!

Vertaal de zin:
Ik zou het leuk vinden om weer iets van je te horen.

Important to study

Page 6:                                                                                         Page 7:                                                                        Page 11

Check your writing skills (20 min)

Step 1: Compare writing assignment 1 (page 7/8)

You need: page 7 in reader+ your written e-mails + page 9 in reader

- Bespreek / vergelijk je e-mail met die van je buurman en overleg samen

(bespreek de theorie van een e-mail opzetten, moeilijk woorden, wat vond je makkelijk/moeilijk, vergelijk jullie antwoorden en bepaal wat goed is)

- Verbeter fouten en vul het schema van blz. 9 in (noteer in je schrift)

Step 2: Compare writing assignment with teacher example

- Pak nu het voorbeeld van je docent en verbeter je e-mail waar nodig

- Geprint voorbeeld op bureau

From:               [e-mail]

to:                     [e-mail]

cc/bcc:             [e-mail] 

subject:           May holidays / Spring Break / Spring holidays  

attachment:   -

Hi Ben!

How are you? I’m doing well. It's great to hear from you again. I really like it that you're going to visit us during the May holidays. My parents think it is a good idea as well. They are also looking forward to it! 

I have a few ideas what we could do when you are coming over. I could show you Volendam. I would like to take a traditional Volendam picture of us in traditional costumes/clothes. Do you know what traditional Dutch clothes look like?

My holiday starts on April 25 and it ends on May 7. On what days would you like to come over?

I hope to hear from you soon!

Best, / Regards, 

Lisa

Punten van aandacht voor
de volgende e-mail

To improve

Verbeterpunten/tips van mij (door rondlopen)

Goal:

Your e-mail format knowledge

Assignment

Part 3: Write e-mail #2

- Together read / work on page 10-11

- Write e-mail #2 (page 11) by yourself

- Write in your notebook

= Homework for next class

Goal:

Practise writing and learn from each other

Read page 11:

Exit assignment

Write down words you find difficult to remember/

needed to look up in a dictionary

- Write these words on page 28