Essay Writing Outline + Introduction

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 5

Welcome!

•  Get your laptops
• Login to the Lesson Up
  

Today

• At the end of the lesson you'll be able to:
•  Write an effective introduction...
• Design a good thesis/research question...
• Give feedback to your peers.
  

Remember? What 3 things should you do before you start writing?

Introduction

Watch the following video and answer the questions

•  What are the three important elements of an introduction?
• What is a thesis and where should you place it in your introduction?
• What are some sentences you should avoid in your introduciton?
  

What are the three elements of the introduction?

What is a thesis and where should you place it in your introduction?

What are some sentences you should avoid in your introduction?

Good thesis/statements

•  Are debatable: it must be something someone could have a different opinion on.
  
• "Pollution is bad for the environment" vs. "At least 25 percent of the federal budget should be spent on limiting pollution".
  

Good thesis/statement: scope

• Not to broad:
  
• "Drug use is detrimental to society" vs. Illegal drug use is detrimental because it encourages gang violence".

Activity (until 10:40)

•  Choose the topic of your mock essay
• Make a quick outline of your introduction: Think about a hook, look up some general information and think of a thesis.
  
• If you are finished with your outline, share it with your neighbour. Give feedback on each others outline and thesis (Be critical, ask questions).
  
• Start writing your introduction.

Share your thesis statement!

Homework

•  Finish your complete outlines
• Finish writing your introductions
• Next week you will give each other feedback on the outlines and the introductions. 
• Don't forget to read your book and work on your credits dossier!