peerfeedback - 4v review writing

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 4

review writing

look back at your review

tips and tops 

in groups

- language > adjectives and adverbs

- content > what info in which paragraph

- organisation > linking words

adjectives

beautiful movie

interesting plot

stunning scenery

adverbs

Unfortunately, the film is not worth your time. 

The plot was moving quickly for the first 30 minutes. 

language of comparison

The plot was much more interesting than the location.

The acting was far better than the plot.

The location was nowhere near as beautiful as I imagined it would be. 

The best part of the film was the location.

The acting was a good deal more interesting than the plot.

adjectives
adverbs

UNDERLINE

ALL ADJECTIVES AND ADVERBS

YOU CAN FIND

content

Paragraph 1

 attention grabber

 title movie 

1 sentence linking plot to location

content

Paragraph 2

plot film

main character

main story line

NO SPOILERS !

content

Paragraph 3

what is the location

what impact did the location have on you

content

Paragraph 4

summary of info

final recommendation

How well did you do in terms of content

😒🙁😐🙂😃

What do you need to do differently next time in terms of content?

organisation

to make your writing more coherent and organised 

you have to use linking words

but, because, and, or, also

linking words

CIRCLE

ALL LINKING WORDS YOU CAN FIND

How statisfied are you about your own review?

😒🙁😐🙂😃

What did you do well in your review?

What will you do differently next time you are writing a review?

rewrite

Choose the paragraph you were least satisfied with

and rewrite the entire paragaph. 

Keep in mind: adjectives, adverbs, linking words!