Writing Y3 great and not so great examples

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 3

Writing

Today

- Examples of good and bad letters to Lara

- Peer assessment

- Questions?

Examples

Most of you have done their homework by submitting an advice letter to Lara. On the following slides, you will see a few examples of good and not so good letters. After each letter, describe what could be improved/what is done right.

The ones that could be improved are red, the nicely written ones are green.

What could be improved in this letter?

What did the writer do well in this letter?

What did the writer do wrong here, according to the writing structure?

What did the writer do well in this letter?

Peer Feedback

Now that you know what a letter should look like, it's time to check each other's work.

Send your letter to the classmate next to you. Check the rubric in SOMToday and mark your neighbours work. What could they improve, looking at the rubric and the structure?