Reviewing the Review 4H

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 4

Reviewing the Review 4H

Instructions

Use the review you've been given by someone else.

And fill in the questions on the next slides.

What is your name?

What's the name of the person whose review you are reviewing?

Does the review have a title? Type either "No" or "Yes: [title]"

Introduction

In the first paragraph you want the following things:

- Name of the store

- Practical information like: location, types of clothes they sell, when the author's visit to the store was. 

What information is given about the store in the first paragraph? (not the rest of the review)

Is there any information missing?

Body Paragraphs

You want 2-3 body paragraphs that have a clear topic each. 

How many body paragraphs does this review have?

1. 0 or just one long block of text.
2. 1
3. 2
4. 3 or more

What is the topic of each body paragraph? Write down in order.

Assignment

According to the assignment, the following things should be mentioned:

- Looks of the store

- The types of clothes

- The employees

Are all the topics in the assignment present? If not, which are missing.

What is said about each assignment topic? Quote parts of the review here.

Creativity

What's not in the assignment is up to you. 

- Add some creative details.

- Use varied & relevant vocabulary to show off your skills. 

What creative "extra" information is given?

Are there any impressive or relevant words used? Quote them here.

Conclusion

This one should contain:

- An overall review. No matter how many bad, neutral, good points you have mentioned, here you decide your conclusion. 

- Specific recommendations.

What is the overall conclusion? Quote it here.

Are there any specific recommendations? (For example: people who like X should go here)

So all in all...

You now have a good idea of whether this review has everything it needs in terms of content.

So let's get to judging and conclude this review. 

What grade would you give this based on content?

1-4

4-5

5-6

6-7

7-8

8-9

9-10

What feedback would you give for this review? (what could be improved, what is incorrect or missing?)

Well done.

Hand the review in with the teacher. 

Start working on the second review assignment.