2425 V6 essay writing: peer review essay 1 + WiP 78 + Passive voice in news articles

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 6

V4: Thu 4 February

• check homework: exc 2-7
  
• TB 4.2
  
• exc 10-15
  

Happy Monday, V6!

Mon 3/2 - Fri 7/2

Study objectives:

I can 

• give and receive feedback using a peer feedback form
  
• use exam vocabulary in context

 

This week's work:

• peer review essay 1
• 5. Academic writing: grammatical accuracy
• Words in Progress exc 78 
• passive voice in news articles

 

 

Optional: 

Rewrite your essay using peer feedback 

hand in 2nd draft + copy received feedback on Magister (deadline Thu 23:00hrs)

 

 

Put your printed essay on your desk

Peer review essay 1

Use the rubrics to review at least 2 of your classmates' essays. Consult your reader or teacher when in doubt!

Next class: Thursday

Optional: 

Rewrite your essay using peer feedback 

hand in 2nd draft + copy received feedback on Magister (deadline Thu 23:00hrs)

 

 

V4: Thu 4 February

• check homework: exc 2-7
  
• TB 4.2
  
• exc 10-15
  

Happy Thursday, V6!

Mon 3/2 - Fri 7/2

Study objectives:

I can 

• recognise a variety of passive forms
• use exam vocabulary in context

 

This week's work:

• Passive voice in news articles
• 5. Academic writing: grammatical accuracy (Magister)
• Words in Progress exc 78 

 

 

Lesson 2

Exploring the Passive Voice in News Articles

1. Visit the BBC News website and choose one recent news article of your interest.

2. Identify Passive Sentences:

find three to five sentences written in the passive voice.

3. Analyse the Use of the Passive Voice:

a) rephrase in active voice.

b) why was passive chosen?

4. Reflect:

• role of passive in news writing?
  
• effect on tone and clarity?
  

WiP exc 78: Mixed bag  (vocab)

(were )compelled

interrogation

accommodated

fierce

complicity

essential

coincidence

pastime

vigorous

dairy

 

to assert

to address

to conduct

elaborate

to disclose

denied

flamboyance

compassionate

(in) vain

aggravated

werden gedwongen

verhoor

ondergebracht

fel, woest

medeplichtigheid

toeval

tijdverdrijf

krachtig, energiek

zuivel

beweren

adresseren

uitvoeren

uitgebreid

onthullen

geweigerd

medelijdend

(hier) nutteloos

verergerd

Homework

Finish this week's tasks

• 5. Academic writing: grammatical accuracy
• Words in Progress exc 78 

 

 

Optional: 

Rewrite your essay using peer feedback 

hand in 2nd draft + copy received feedback on Magister (deadline TONIGHT 23:00hrs)