walk two moons lesson 3

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 1

Giving feedback

Today

Giving feedback

Exercises to help you grow!

New writing assignment

Lesson feedback

Partners for students on teams

Louisa, Merel, Lotte                               Sissy & Emma

Maryam & Anushka                               Alex & Quinn

Shaylee & Rithvik                                   Anna, Kyara & Kylie

Ahmed & Rishaan                                  

Daan & Thijs

What do they want feedback on?

What did they do well?

What could they improve on?

what was the most
helpful feedback?

New sucess criteria?

1 Answering the question

2 Writing plan

3 Punctuation

4  Taking the story further

The rubric

Criteria 1 Answering the question	Criteria 2 Writing plan	Criteria 3 Punctuation (see cheat sheet)	Criteria 4 Taking the story further
I can complete this independently	I can complete this independently	I can complete this independently	I can complete this independently
I need a little help from the teacher still	I need a little help from the teacher still	I need a little help from the teacher still	I need a little help from the teacher still
I find this difficult and need more teacher help to understand it	I find this difficult and need more teacher help to understand it	I find this difficult and need more teacher help to understand it	I find this difficult and need more teacher help to understand it

Talk to your partner

Discuss what the last writing task was with each other

Explain your answer when the teacher asks 

Practise exercises

The assignment

You have 20 minutes

You may use the Walk two moons book to help you

You are going to write a short script between Sal and the Sherrif. What did they say during their conversation on page 234?  Ï don't suppose you'd mind telling me...

Both characters should have about 10 lines each (20 in total) 

This helps you develop your understanding of characters

Finished? Check spelling and punctuation (and of course to see if it''s an exciting text!

- You have 20 minutes

- You may use the Walk two moons book to help you

- Using the writing guide, create the text between the Sherrif and police officer

- Both characters should have about 10 lines each (20 in total)

- This will help you develop your story writing skills

- Does it 

The assignment...

Step 1

Read the writing guide

Underline everthing that must be included in the assignment

Highlight which parts of the rubric apply to you

Discuss with a partner - do you have the same ideas?

Step 2

Open or get the planning worksheet 

Add details in each step of your planning

Swap it with a neighbour

Check it with the rubric are criteria 1&2 complete?

Let's discuss

Step 3 - venn diagram

Brainstorm

what could the Sherrif have said?

what could the police officer have said?

why would an audience be interested in hearing this?

Draw a venn diagram - see next slide

Put this information in your plan

NOW WRITE!!!

what do you think you
have improved on today?

Next lesson: feedback on your writing

                        how to make your writing even                                    better!!

Great to work with you all today!