Letter writing

Start assignment
Open your Checkpoint paper (2nd one)
Read the writing assignment
In pairs, brainstorm and write on the worksheet
Who the person is - what should you tell us about them
What have they done - why is that special?
Why they should win - as many reasons as possible
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Start assignment
Open your Checkpoint paper (2nd one)
Read the writing assignment
In pairs, brainstorm and write on the worksheet
Who the person is - what should you tell us about them
What have they done - why is that special?
Why they should win - as many reasons as possible

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Lesson aim
 By the end of this lesson you will have noted down the correct letter structure

By the end of the lesson you will have 
practised expanding points you are
writing/talking about


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Lesson aims
Discussion - letter structure
Writing tips
Audience and purpose
Lets try
Aims check in

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Answers

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what should a letter comprise of?

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Example
Is this letter in the correct order?
If not, cut the letter up and stick it in your book in the correct order

Finished? What do you notice about the paragraphs?
What information do they give us? Write it beside it in your book

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Letter structure
Letter
structure

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Tips
Formal or informal language?
Introduction  - who are you and why are you writing?  
Conclusion - what are you trying to achieve?
Ideas split into paragraphs
Check and double check spelling and punctuation
Audience and purpose
Sentences: short and long sentences - why?

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Audience and purpose
Audience - who
Purpose - what/why

Why should we read books
Given an audience by teacher
Think how you'd convinve them to read...
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Expanding points - group assignment
Use the letter assignment 
Come up with three reasons why
Reasons why this person should win

Write a detailed body paragraph together - include all three reasons. Light up your audiences brain!!!
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7:00

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Yes and...
In pairs
A = asks b a question 'what would you like to do this weekend?'
B= answers (light up A's brain!)
A=answers yes and adds their own idea
B=answers yes and then (gives more detail)
A= repeats 'yes and 'until they have a clear answer
Why?

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Lesson aims
Discussion - brainstorm
Brainstorm letter
Use of language
Lets try
Friday lesson
Aims check in

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Lesson aim
By the end of the lesson you will have 
practised expanding points you are
writing/talking about

By the end of the lesson you can use your 
knowledge of writing to write a paragraph

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question which parts go where - white boards! (A's)

write down why you should expand points (B's) 
Expanding points - group assignment
Read the letter assignment 
Get the worksheet from the teacher
In groups of 3
Brainstorm lots of different supporting ideas for the three points given

Why?


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Use of language
Which of your ideas would  light up your readers brain and why?

Discuss this in your threes

Write down three ways to use language to help you do that

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Use of language
  • Descriptive words - adjectives and adverbs
  • Imagery - what is that again
  • Similes/ metaphor/ onomatopoeia/ alliteration/personification
  • Long/short sentences
  • Paragraph structure
  • Which ones will you use? Note some ideas down.
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Let's try!
In your notebook
Use all the information so far
Write a detailed introduction paragraph together 
Light up your audiences brain!!!
Why - letter writing in Friday's lesson

Great test practise - helping each other!

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Another teacher will take your lesson (and has this information)

Please write the whole letter in the practise test
You may use your notes but must work alone
Finish at home if you run out of time

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Lesson aim
 By the end of this lesson you will have noted down the correct letter structure

By the end of the lesson you will have 
practised expanding points you are
writing/talking about


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question which parts go where - white boards! (A's)

write down why you should expand points (B's) 
Let's write - neatly please!
Read the question carefully
Have a mini brainstorm about how you might want to answer it
Write a plan using bulletpoints - or your own preferred way
Expand your topic - per paragraph 3 supporting points
Check the rubric  - have you thought about everything in it?

Hand your letter in at the end of the lesson 

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What would you like to recap next lesson?

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Expanding points - group assignment
Look at the letter assignment (next slide)
Come up with three reasons
Reasons for and against
In pairs/threes

How can you relate the points? Stupid ones are also ok!!!

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Assignment
Mobile phone ban letter to Headteacher:
  • Why do you think mobile phones have been banned?
  • Reasons why mobile phones shouldn't be banned
  • Reasons why they should be banned

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Let's write - neatly please!
Read the question carefully
Have a mini brainstorm about how you might want to answer it
Write a plan using bulletpoints - or your own preferred way
Expand your topic - per paragraph 3 supporting points
What should you double check?


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