Essay Writing - 4 Coherence

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Welcome! 

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Road map
Essay writing 
  • Thesis statement and top sentences
  • Coherence


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How?
  • Planning
  • Shaping
  • Drafting
  • Revising
  • Editing/proofreading
  • Hand in

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Thesis statement
Although some may object to the death penalty, this punishment is a necessity to control public order and to ensure people's safety

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Thesis statement
Students should be encouraged to pursue a career in science because of the large number of job options and the higher salaries

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Framework
350 - 400 words - level B2
Introduction with your thesis statement
  • anecdote, reason you chose the topic, background
Body: your actual argument
  • argument in support
  • argument in support
  • refutation of opposing argument 
conclusion

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Coherence
A paragraph and its larger entity, the essay, are coherent when all its sentences/ paragraphs clearly relate to one another.

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Coherence
  • arranging details
  • transitional words/phrases/sentences
  • parallel structures
  • repeating key words and phrases

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Coherence
Napoleon certainly made a change for the worse by leaving his small kingdom of Elba. He went back to Paris and he abdicated for a second time. He fled to Rochefort in hope of escaping to America. He gave himself up to the English captain of the ship Bellerophon. He suggested that the Prince Regent grant him asylum, and he was refused. All he saw of England was the Devon coast and Plymouth Sound as he passed on to the remote island of St. Helena. He died on 5 May 1821 at the age of fifty-two. 

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Next week
1. Chaucer - The Reeve's Tale

2. Writing skills 

3. Choose your content


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